elevator pitch 3

1.Below is the link to my 3rd elevator pitch

https://drive.google.com/open?id=15PRJp69eLAY8uZ7rVV98kQsl4Lhro8Zt 

2. I thought I got some good feedback on my previous pitch. A good piece of advice I got was to make more/better eye contact with the camera.

3. I decided to take the advice and tried my best to make better eye contact in this pitch. Furthermore, I decided to change up the style a little bit but hopefully kept the same info and purpose is the previous pitches. I also decided to add a little call to action at the end, I understand this is more of a pitch to investors, but I took the final 10 or so seconds to tell people to actually go out and buy the product/where it would actually be available for people to find. Not including a call to action is one of the biggest marketing mistakes in an advertisement and this is essentially that so I decided to include it. If I were to give the actual pitch to an investor, I may just leave the end out.

Comments

  1. Janine SantiagoApril 5, 2020 at 4:17 PM

    Hi Marcus, again, you had a great elevator pitch! I think it is smart that you adapted your pitch to cater to different audiences with that call to action at the end. I believe while you will be pitching to many investors, you will also have to be convincing people to believe in and try out your product. Also, good job at implementing the eye contact feedback, I feel like you improved with that.

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